Thursday, September 18, 2008

What About This?

Better, or worse? And how do the Ws grab you? I mushed a couple of Ns together since the original advert I was mangling didn't have any Ws, but I'm not sure I love them.

7 comments:

  1. I love the image (and would wear a tee shirt) and have no comment on the Ws, but...

    I preferred the original because..

    The New New

    has a better balance than...

    The New New

    The left side is now too heavy. The original was bunched up a little, but that could be solved with larger, but equal spacing...

    The New New

    instead of

    The New New

    But it's all good work!

    Aloha!

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  2. You could always replace the original text with something in a suitably old typeface. I LIKE IT!

    I would add a pointing index finger...but that's just me! :c)

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  3. I prefer the second version...... The assymetry intrigues me.

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  4. See...this is exactly what happened when I tried asking for opinions! You get n respondents and n+1 opinions... :c)

    Hey...your word verifier thingie is asking me to type "jughq" - I didn't realise you ran that kind of site!

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  5. Have you tried putting "is" and "the" together in the upper right? that might scan better.

    Or maybe "Old is" "The New" and then a single large "New" under the bike.

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  6. Image only coming and going/both front and back Thanks Eduard , draudE

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